Fic: Till You Make It

[lightgetsin]

Till You Make It (19776 words) by lightgetsin
Chapters: 1/1
Fandom: Dresden Files - Jim Butcher
Rating: Explicit
Warning: No Archive Warnings Apply
Relationships: Harry Dresden/John Marcone
Characters: Harry Blackstone Copperfield Dresden, John Marcone, Elaine
Summary:

I squirmed, pinned between him and the counter. "It’s not – look, I don’t run to schedule, okay?" I said. "Don’t – I’m not easy."

"You don’t say." Okay, that much sarcasm was uncalled for.

"I mean it," I said doggedly. "I’m not one of those ‘insert coin, pull lever’ girls."

Comments

[killerkaleidoscope]

Uh. Damn. I have a hard time putting words together because whoa, mind and other, more physical aspects of the self have been truly and utterly blown. THAT WAS SOME REALLY GOOD WRITING. Voice, character, plot, and porn are all A+. Very, very nice work.

I do love the little detail of the maker's mark on the vibrator, that someone very smart is probably making a hell of a living on toys for the magical techbane set, and that Harry's way to loosen up is to admire and take apart a delicate, fiddly masterpiece of magic and engineering over the course of weeks.

[lightgetsin]

:D Thank you!

Don't ask how much time I've spent pondering the likely applications of magic to the sex toy industry. Just don't.